Sunday, January 24, 2010

she needs someone

She tells you what you want to hear,
She always gives you what you want.
But when it really matters,
Do you give her, her heart's desire?

She's numb from all that she's feeling,
She's lost from all that she's thinking.
But the most important thing is,
Do you see her drowning?

She's changed her line of thoughts,
She's lost who she once was.
But what can you do to remedy it,
Do you even understand what's going on at all?

She's been there all those times,
She's given all she can.
But when she needs you to,
Do you give her back what she's lost?

She's not the world's perfect person,
She knows she has endless flaws.
But when it all comes surfacing out,
Do you smite her down or will you stand by her?


Terence said...

lovely poem! did you write it yourself? hope you find some1 who'll stand by u! :)

goingkookies said...


yup.. wrote it myself =)

hehe.. doesn't have to mean me =p

zewt said...

he will... he will...

goingkookies said...

i dunno.. =/